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Moriah Leila

  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Mansion Chapter 2

    I really don't like a preamble so I am just going to get right into the review. We rolled through the piles of garbage and hit the table. There was ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Mansion chapter 1

    Most everything has been covered for this chapter but I did have one thing to point out that I don't think anyone else picked up. I sat up and walked ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter Two, Part One

    Hey, I'm here again...Are you ready? Here we go... The sheet that Panatar had placed over his face to shield his eyes from dust had not worked as well as ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Ink Catcher

    I will do nitpicks, which trust me, there aren't too many, and then I will be more thorough with Characters, Setting, and Overall. The boy leaning against her desk was ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Viruses Vs. Spysweepers

    Sorry it has taken me awhile to get to this review. Here is my format for reviews, I tend to get the nitpicky stuff out of the way first and ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    Just wanted to let all of you know that it might take me some time to complete all of these reviews so please be patient with me. Emmylou, in order ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Purple Magic: Chapter 1

    You did really good improving that first part. I saw that you took some of my suggestions. I really found nothing wrong in the first part so I am going ...

    Apr 1, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    Finally, I am caught up on reviews. I apologize for the delay, I have been moving the past two crazy living out of boxes right now. I am ready for ...

    Apr 1, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Thirst, Book 1: The Hunter

    Here we go, last part... I couldn’t help smiling as I realized I’d covered almost a third of San Pedro, on foot, in a matter of hours between early this ...

    Apr 1, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Thirst, Book 1: The Hunter

    Sorry about the delay, settling into a new home is so hectic. The stinks of the garbage mingled with the harsh feel of the asphalt beneath me. You are such ...

    Apr 1, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Thirst, Book 1: The Hunter

    I am going to review this in pieces, kind of how you posted them. In the future, it might be better to split these pieces up so that it would ...

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter One, Part Two

    “Your horse is a little strange,” a voice from behind him said. “It's willing to fly in the front ranks of any battle, but when it comes to getting wet, ...

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Question Game

    Isn't it spelled Sirius Black?

    Mar 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    I am back and ready to do some rapid reviews. As always, I require no payment for reviews since I do receive points for each review I complete. Furthermore, I ...

    Mar 18, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    I am done with all of the reviews and ready for more. Tomorrow, however, I am off. It is my anniversary, but I will be back on Wednesday to complete ...

    Mar 17, 2009


I understand what you're saying, and your comments are valuable, but I'm gonna ignore your advice.
— Roald Dahl